Score: 9

"hmmm... keep it up."

submission: ++ Long Walk Home ++

date: June 29, 2008

overall it was pretty impressive.. i haven't been listening to your other creations but this so-called draft of yours is already one impressing piece...although i felt that the wolves were kind of out of place in this one...it's not that i don't like it but it seems that the wolves are getting on the nerves of the two children lost in the road and are ready to curse.(no offense just think the wolves howls' should be more..different? i don't know at all... maybe it's because it sounds kind of repetitive..my opionon only that's all. : ) _)

Score: 8

"its fine as it is"

submission: "True Dreams"

date: May 5, 2008

i'm not really listening to tunes here but this looks finished to me.